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Thread: Brevity is The Soul of Wit? And Newsstand Comic Book Sales by Darin Wagner

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    Darin Wagner writes for Bleeding Cool

    Some months ago, patrons of Barnes & Noble may have noticed that comic books were back. The days of comics being a mass market item seem to be returning, I thought. So I picked one up and paged through it. I won?t say which title it was, but it was one featuring a character I do have fondness for. I was done looking at it within fifteen seconds flat. I don?t mean that I came to a decision on whether I was going to buy it or not in fifteen seconds flat. I mean I literally blew through the content in fifteen seconds flat.

    There wasn't much there. The entire comic book, all 20-22 pages, was executed in the decompressed, ?cinematic? style complete with stacked ?widescreen? panels. Now, before I go any further, let me just say that I do like a little bit of cinematic style here and there? maybe for one or two pages in a given comic book. It?s a great way to jar the reader with a change of pace and add some seriousness and sometimes even a dash of ?realism? to the story. It?s good for moments? but a whole comic? That?s debatable at best. One thing I do believe vehemently is that it?s a very poor choice of style for a comic book intended to be a mass market product.

    The reason I believe this is simple: It doesn't leave a given single issue of a comic book with enough content to justify the price. Someone who doesn't read comics, but liked any of the recent Marvel movies or the Nolan Batman films will pick up one of those comics and will put it back for that very reason. Back when I was first collecting comics in the early ?80s, every issue, even if it was part of a multi-part story (most of which back then were two-parters, btw), was a product in-and-of-itself. These comics were satisfying purchases because they were written not only to move the story and the character along but also to accommodate the first-time reader? and stuff actually happened in them. A lot of stuff.

    My own personal rule when it comes to whether or not a comic book has enough content to justify a purchase is that a minimum of three dramatic moments in it. I don?t care what those dramatic moments are? a fight, a revelation, a discovery, an origin briefly retold, a romantic moment, a humorous happenstance? it doesn't matter. Three is good, four or five are better.

    Another thing about this comic book that helped things speed along a little too much was that it contained no less than three two-page spreads and three splash pages. Two-page spreads need to be epic. They shouldn?t be wasted on depicting someone lying in bed sleeping (unless it depicts an epic dream he/she is having simultaneously) or depicting the main character?s new apartment (particularly if it?s a normal apartment) or two people talking. Two-page spreads are something to generally avoid, in my opinion. Most of the dramatic moments that do find their way onto two-page spreads can, I feel, be just as powerful as a full-page splash or as a half-page panel. Think of the most memorable and powerful moments in modern comics and count how many were two-page spreads. When Bullseye stabbed Elektra, it wasn't a two-page spread. The first time we saw Bruce Banner caught in mid-air with the Gamma Bomb going off behind him, it wasn't a two-page spread. When Jean Grey killed herself in front of Cyclops, it didn't happen on a two-page spread. When Supergirl died in the first Crisis, it wasn't a two-page spread. When Beta Ray Bill first became Beta Ray Thor, it wasn't a two-page spread. When Batman rendered Guy Gardner unconscious with one punch, it didn't happen on a two-page spread. None of these moments were splash pages either. They are two-page spreads in our minds, but they aren't on paper.

    ?Writing for the trade? doesn't work at a newsstand? even one in a place like B&N where trade paperbacks are available. If the story has been written for a trade, I feel it should be available solely as a trade. Keep the stories in monthly comic books that are intended to be for the mass market quick and action-packed. Trade paperbacks that collect a story or story set are just that - collected editions. Readers will understand if, while reading the trade, there are recaps happening every 22 pages or so.

    ?Mass market? means you are not going after people who are already hooked on comics. Those people buy them at comic book shops. You are going after people who don?t read them. Maybe they did way back when and don?t now or maybe they have never picked one up before. In any case, the product should accommodate them. They need to have value. An inflated, padded story fragment isn?t going to give anyone the bug. On the contrary, it will turn them off to comics. Get to the point and tell the story.

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    Alright. Now tell us something that people haven't said a million times over in the last decade.

    Ah well. At least he didn't blame it on the liberals this time.

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    I know...don't get me wrong...it was well-written but how many people/times does it need to be said that comics are an awful return on investment. I can get 300 hours out of Skyrim for $70 (incl tax)...$70 worth of comics MIGHT be a half hour of reading...an hour if you're slow...$70 worth of movies (say 5) is 8-10 hours...$70 is a month of cable...

    Not to mention their increase in price relative to inflation...

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    Didnt DC say there werent going to write for the trade in the DCNU? LOL

    In Japan you pay 4-5$ at a manga cafe
    and you can read all you want plus get free drinks in a comfy chair for hours. If they started doing that in the US you could read every Marvel and DC comic that came out in the month and still have time to play some video games.
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    Quote Originally Posted by thekeith82 View Post
    Alright. Now tell us something that people haven't said a million times over in the last decade.

    Ah well. At least he didn't blame it on the liberals this time.
    I thought it was time to lighten up a little.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Darin Wagner View Post
    I thought it was time to lighten up a little.
    Heh. Well, you did that at least, I'll grant you

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    Some of the OP's points are fair enough, especially when page counts are falling, but if it's harder to justify a two page spread these days, doesn't that apply equally to retelling the origin story every other issue? Quite apart from anything else, if the reader's seen the film, they presumably won't need to be reminded.

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    Tell me something new. With that said I do think quite a few new 52 comic have tried to remedy that. They're not all doing it, and they're not all doing it well but they are trying a bit at least. Still not enough though.
    Bendis or Fraction perfectly represent the opposite. Even in good comic books like Ultimate Spider-Man, it is way too short and way to fast to go through it, and that's when the story is good. Bendis' Avengers stories, with rare exceptions are really lacking (as much as I'm fond of his dialogues, though I'm starting to be a bit sick of them as well)
    But once again, yeah, we know that and we agree...
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    I couldn't agree more. The cost of a comic is out of proportion to the amount of time it takes to read it. It is a premium product at a premium price. If that's your market, fine, but most people, even those who might be interested in reading comics, are going to dish out $2.99 or $3.99 for something that takes 10-15 minutes to read. A series today takes three issues to tell the same story you used to get in one issue. That's not an exaggeration. That is the truth.

    I can go haul out an old school copy of The New Teen Titans or Batman and the Outsiders and I'm amazed at how much story is in them. I was talking recently about an old issue of Batman and the Outsiders (Issue 19 to be exact) where Geo-Force is trying to kill a university professor who tried to convince a female student (Denise, a friend of Geo-Force) into having sex with him in exchange for grades. The female student tries to kill herself and Geo-Forced decides the prof needs to die. Batman can't stop him so he calls in Superman. The two battle, Geo-Forces get the upper hand, but Superman outsmarts him and wins. Meanwhile Batman uses his detective skills to gather evidence agains the prof, showing the system works and he'll be going away to prison for years.

    All of that takes place in one issue. Today, that would be, at minimum, a four issues story arch.

    The first issue would feature Halo's flash back and end with her telling Batman about Denise calling Geo-Force and him rushing to her house. Because you need a dramatic finish it would likely end with Denise having no pulse.

    The second issue would start with the EMTs bringing her back and Geo-Force proclaiming he is going to kill the prof and flying off. Batman will then try to figure out how to stop him while trying to find information on the prof. The issue would then cut to scene between Black Lightning and Katana. It take one page in the original but it would eat up the rest of the second issue. The issue would end with Geo-Force arriving at the Prof's house threatening to kill him.

    The third issue would open with Geo-Force threatening the prof then cut to Batman trying to figure out how to stop the team's most powerful member. You cut again to Black Lightning and katana fighting the street thugs and talking. Halo would be sent to meet Batman's solution while he begins his detective work, but we wouldn't see who the solution was was, just a voice balloon and an astonished Halo. Cut back to Geo-Force about to snap the profs neck and then Superman confronts Geo-Force to end the issue.

    Issue four would be one big fight between Superman/Geo-Force. It would end the same way as the original story with Batman showing up with the evidence to have the prof arrested. Issue ends with Brion at Denise's bedside.
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    I agree with pretty much everything in this post. The only thing slightly strange is the "fifteen seconds". I can imagine it was a quick read, but do you mean that you actually read the entire issue in 15 seconds?

    Like I said, I agree with this being a problem and many current DC/Marvel books suffer from this decompressed storytelling. But I'd love to know what this particular issue was just to compare my own experience in reading it.

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